On Tue, Jun 03, 2003 at 11:57:16AM +0900, Stephen J. Turnbull wrote:
> I suggest
> 
>     The container file and its subdirectories on the server will hold
>     the data for files stored in Coda. Directory contents as well as

I still don't like that first sentence too much. Maybe,

    Directories on the server will be used to store container files
    that hold the actual data of files stored in Coda. Directory
    contents as well as ...

>     metadata will be stored in the RVM segment that we already
>     configured earlier.
> 
>     You should only have one such container file hierarchy on a disk
>     partition, otherwise the server will generate incorrect estimates
>     about the actual amount of exportable disk space.
> 
> with an additional pedantic and gratuitous grammatical change in
> paragraph 2.  :-)

I know my english is not perfect, these pedantic changes are always
welcome. ;)

Jan